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    A little "commercial" I created for HEX - would like to get some feedback :)

    Hello people of HEX!

    I just created some kind of own commercial for HEX - mostly out of the kickstarter trailer but added some special stuff that I created myself. I would like some feedback and hope you enjoy it!

    Last edited by Stok3d; 12-21-2013 at 07:35 PM.
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    I liked it pretty well. I especially like ozawa's voiceover. She's so busy, how did you get her to make time for you?
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    Pretty cool. A couple thoughts.

    1. Put a black border around the white lettering to make it more easily readable.

    2. Maybe should have switched the hex meteor impact picture with the one before it, since in that panel the very first thing is talking about the impact.

    Good job!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gwaer View Post
    I liked it pretty well. I especially like ozawa's voiceover. She's so busy, how did you get her to make time for you?
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    Quote Originally Posted by BongoBong View Post
    Pretty cool. A couple thoughts.

    1. Put a black border around the white lettering to make it more easily readable.

    2. Maybe should have switched the hex meteor impact picture with the one before it, since in that panel the very first thing is talking about the impact.

    Good job!

    I was also not that happy with the wall of text, but couldn't figure a way out yet to make it like flowing line by line with the speech So maybe I will do the blackboarder you said for now, could be good - And the second - third picture is fine IMO, in the second picture you can see the meteor flying which actually fits the speech and text. Not sure if I interprate the pictures a bit wrong?
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    Other oppinions?
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    I have a few issues with it.

    1) It's long... Commercials should be under 3 mins, and even that's pushing it in length for me.

    2) It's really hard to understand the voiceover. I love the idea, I just felt the pitch was forced and became muddled because of it. It also didn't flow well. The wording felt clunky.

    3) It felt like you were explaining the game, as if we had already downloaded it and were launching it. By that I mean, it felt bland and slow.

    4) The in-game footage is really nice. But it's repetitive (I don't need to see every equipment in the game...), and has no information associated with it. If you truly want a commercial type video, you need to shorted it and show the important part of each aspect.

    All in all, I'd love to talk more id depth about the entire thing, because I love the idea. A fan-made commercial can spiral off wonderful things for HEX. Also, please don't take this as "I HATE IT", because it's the opposite. I just want to help make it better.

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    I'd agree that a commercial should be in the "under a minute" or right at a minute.

    as a commercial you need to advertise what aspects are in HEX. Keeps, equipment for cards, gems, AH, card trading via in game AH, PvP, etc.

    There's the option to do 2 commercials--one for PvE and one for PvP. The full commercial of that could be them together (full length commercial).
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    Not sure about requiring a minute, but I completely agree on your second point. As for your third one, we don't have enough PvE content to show it. PvP is essentially part of PvE so that might be really hard to do...

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    I think it's a really good start. But things I would add are descriptions of the screens you are seeing.

    Like just brief text like:

    PvE and PvP content
    Gem your cards
    Level your Champion
    Battle Opponents

    Things like that. It's refreshing to see community members make content like this.

    Cheers!

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    Right, I wouldn't worry about length, it's not like it's actually a commercial going on TV. The descriptions of the various screens you're adding sounds like a great idea.
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